PAULA WILSON - WRITER
CONTENTS

SHORT STORIES
for children - Three's No Good
100 word - Avalanche
                - Spring Cleaning




For Children

THREE’S NO GOOD
 
The shot was sweet, falling through the ring without touching the sides. Ben couldn't help smiling as the kid who had released the basketball pumped his fist in the big kids' direction.
            Ben sat in unmowed grass, watching three boys play street ball on a half court, built on a vacant block midway down his street. He did not know who they were and they had not asked him to join in – although everyone knew three's not any good to play ball. You really needed four. But they hadn't asked him to join them. So, being new in the street, he just sat with his basketball wedged in the joint of what remained of his left arm. He didn't remember loosing it. No big deal.
            The big kid regained control of the ball. In his Bulls singlet and matching shorts he was giving his two mates a lesson in ball control. And because he was half a head taller when he missed a shot he usually won the rebound.
            Ben shuffled around on the grass. He could match him in height. It would make the game more even. The ball ricocheted off the wobbly backboard, bouncing towards the street. Ben stuck out his right hand, grabbing the ball when it looked like it was to late to prevent it ending up squashed under passing cars. Jumping to his feet, he shot a pass back to the big kid. Now was his chance.
            'Wanna play two on two?'
            The big kid's stare fixed on Ben's arm before moving down to his new boots.
            'You reckon just 'cause you got a pair of those means you can play basketball?'
            'Yeah.' Ben answered.
            'Well it don't and you ain't playin'.'
            Ben turned to walk away. No, he said to himself, I'll show you. He bounced the ball between his legs, reversed, drove past the big kid and lay the ball up with his good arm. It slipped through the ring and Ben caught it before it dropped to the court.
            'Way to go!' one of the other two yelled.
            Nobody else spoke. A truck roared down the street, stirring up a breeze. Sweat trickling down Ben's back turned icy, making his singlet cling.
            'It's no use playing with only three. You need four. It's gotta be even.' Ben said.
            They stood facing each other, like players lining up in a real game. Nobody moved. Another truck roared by, raising the breezing again. A soft drink can rolled across the asphalt. They continued to stare at his arm but he could see two on two was beginning to look like a good idea.
            'No. I'm not playing with him.' The big kid's face had almost turned the same colour as his hair. Red. Red hair, red face, red uniform. Ben wanted to laugh but he knew it wouldn't help him get a game.
            'Why not Tim?' Asked the little kid who had sunk the jump shot over him.
            'I'm just not.'
            Ah well that's that, Ben told himself. I tried. He turned slowly, tucked the basketball under his part arm, retrieved his jacket from the grass and headed for the street.
            'You scared he'll beat you?' Sounds of scrambling feet became mixed up with yells and grunts. Ben spun back to the boys. Tim and the little kid pushed at other, returning shove for shove.
            'Stop.' He yelled so hard the words ripped at his throat. 'Stop. I'm going.'
            Still clenching singlets, they glared into each other's eyes, neither wanting to be the first to give in. Tim dragged his opponent up close before releasing his hold.
            'No, come and play. Three's no good.'
            Now it was Tim's turn to walk away. He didn't say anything as he sank into the grass where Ben had sat.
            'Come on Tim.'
            Tim dropped his head low and watched the grass between his knees.
            They played until the sun dropped behind the houses. They played two on one, one on one. They sank basket after basket from the foul line. Then from out where the three point line would have been if somebody had thought to paint in lines. And all the time Tim sat watching the grass grow between his knees.
            'We have a game every night,' the little kid said when they could no longer see the ring.
            'Great.' Ben tied his jacket around his waist.
            The two boys moved off in the opposite direction. Leaving Ben standing on the pavement looking at the outline of Tim's head.
            'See you Tim.' He didn't really expect to get an answer.
            Ben had just made it out of the ray of the streetlight when he heard their arrival. Shuffling feet and loud voices. He paused in the shadows. Maybe they wouldn't see him.
            They didn't see Ben, but Tim, still sitting on the grass, became their target. In a flurry of whooping they sprinted out of sight onto the court.
            Ben could not make out what the gang was saying, but the way they were shouting and the noises they made jumping around told him Tim was in trouble.
            He pressed into the wooden palings. What help would he be? And his mum had said to be in before it got dark. He edged along the fence, away from the court. Away from the street light.
            'Take 'em off or we'll knock yer head off.' He heard that command clearly. They were shouting louder. Surely they wouldn't really knock Tim's head off. He stayed frozen in the shadows. If he ran he would be home before they knew he was there. But they said they would knock Tim's head off.
            Ben dropped his basketball and ran. Ran back onto the court. Breaking through the group surrounding Tim, right into the middle.
            'You right Tim?'
            Tim was sitting on the dark court yanking off his runners. This time he did not stare at Ben's arm but straight into his face. He threw one runner towards his attackers.
            Ben looked around counting to himself. Oh hell, there's five of them. And they're big. Real big.
            'We'll have your runners too. Punk.'
            Five. And only me and Tim and Tim's sitting on his backside taking off his runners. Ah well, I'm not much at fighting anyway. Ben joined Tim on the ground and started to undo his laces.
            They stood in the night. Only the two of them and the rising moon. Cold from the grass creeping through their socks into their toes. Ben wriggled his while peering down at his feet. Mum'll go sicko, she's always going on about not walking outside in my socks. And it's late. I'm dead.
            'See you Tim.'
            This time Ben received a reply. 'Be on my side tomorrow?'
Ben looked back over his shoulder.
            'Yeah. Maybe. If me Mum ever lets me out again.'

© 1996
Previously published School Magazine - Orbit (New South Wales, Australia) 1999
Winner of the 1996 Best Story for a Child in the Society of Women Writers Victoria Awards


100 Word Short Stories


AVALANCHE

Children came down the mountain in threes and fours. Seven hours earlier a constable said,  'There's been an avalanche up the mountain.' Now she stood at the bottom of that mountain searching faces as they came into the spotlights. A woman screamed collapsing into the arms of her husband. Kristen feared the sound would be her own and she had no-one to hold her. 'Mum, Mum.' Her emotions were tangled, glad for the parents, hating them because it was not her child. 'Mum, Mum.' Hands dragged on her neck and she was crying in the arms of her young daughter.

© 2008


SPRING CLEANING 

It was the first day of spring. Denise felt inspired to get out in the garden. Her husband usually worked on it weekends, she thought he might appreciate a little help. She went into his shed looking for tools; it was a long time since she last ventured in there and she had to hunt around for the pruning shears. She found them in a draw along with a bundle of letters that began ‘My darling Barry…’ It was the second day of spring. Denise buried her husband in the backyard, and planted a lemon tree on top of him.

© 2008



Writing Tips

  • 100 word short stories should have all the elements of any other short story
  • a beginning, middle and end
  • tension
  • believable characters who want something
  • a change should happen to the main character
  • 100 word short stories are a great way to hone your editing skills
  • each word should be economical there is no room for wasted or frivolous words
  • editing does not mean just getting rid of 'and' and 'the'
  • often one word can take the place of two
  • do not manipulate the story to fit the word count


Give this form of short story a go, it is a challenge but one worth trying. You never know you might become addicted.



Places to Submit


Positive Words, Editor Sandra Lynn James
PO Box 798, Heathcote 3523
Victoria, Australia



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